morning sun
two white kittens wobbly
under a junk car

posted by vina @ 8:20 PM           


At 1:37 AM, June 12, 2009, Blogger Bill said...

Do you mean "junked" (abandoned) or old, beat up? The image works either way. You might consider "wobble" in place of "wobbly." Good one anyway.

At 2:32 PM, June 15, 2009, Blogger vina said...

hehe, yeah, i realized my mistake after i posted it. NO adjectives or adverbs!

I really appreciate your pointers, Bill.


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